jueves, 10 de febrero de 2011

some ideas for the big write tomorrow

Include the purpose of the guide and a statement of the issue that is being debated)
Facts-People have been wearing school uniforms for two hundred years.80% of UK schools wear uniform however, every year more schools are getting rid of school uniform.Many people are debating the issue of school uniform.
3 paragraphs supporting school uniform
     To identify the school they attend--proud,
passive tense-present
Safety-school trips
Makes everyone the same they could be judged by their clothes.Not fair.
Everbody is put on an equal standing
3 paragraphs against school uniform
children will look more fashionable casual and relaxed
comfortable
Express your own personality-children are not robots
o sum up
This writer believes....
clauses marked by commas,semi colons used to separate to connected sentences
However,furthermore,if could might,on the other hand ,finally,firstly,secondly.
Remember to bring your favourite pen any soothing classical CDs you have and a special notebook.Let's all be great writers